You have a nice, balanced composition, and your ink constraint works well to amplify the form of your objects. Your choice of placing the objects along a diagonal line leads the eye across the piece well. I think the addition of deeper values could add a great range of depth to this, as it seems a little underdeveloped. Otherwise, great job!
i live the retro style to this painting , however it could be better with some shading and a lot more saturation overall i like how you laid your subjects out and it brings me back to college *sniffle
You have a nice, balanced composition, and your ink constraint works well to amplify the form of your objects. Your choice of placing the objects along a diagonal line leads the eye across the piece well. I think the addition of deeper values could add a great range of depth to this, as it seems a little underdeveloped. Otherwise, great job!
ReplyDeleteYou will notice what Gracie says more as you publish these - the colors and values tend to washout - be bold Jamie!
ReplyDeletei live the retro style to this painting , however it could be better with some shading and a lot more saturation overall i like how you laid your subjects out and it brings me back to college *sniffle
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