I like the composition of this piece. The flow of the dress makes your eyes move to the girl's violin, then to her face. I think some pops of bolds colors will help bring out some parts, like the jellyfish, and her violin. I'm very curious about the story behind this.
The contrast has really improved and photographs well. The diagonal above the figure is a little odd and does not help the composition at all. You should re think that area. I also think some additional attention to the edges of the dress is called for given the overall clarity of the rest of the figure - but you are getting there.
Your use of color is really good, but I feel like you Could benefit more by layering the paint slowly, some areas tend to get gray because the layers got mixed to much. Overall I’m excited to see the end result!!! :)
I like the composition of this piece. The flow of the dress makes your eyes move to the girl's violin, then to her face. I think some pops of bolds colors will help bring out some parts, like the jellyfish, and her violin. I'm very curious about the story behind this.
ReplyDeleteThe contrast has really improved and photographs well. The diagonal above the figure is a little odd and does not help the composition at all. You should re think that area. I also think some additional attention to the edges of the dress is called for given the overall clarity of the rest of the figure - but you are getting there.
ReplyDeleteYour use of color is really good, but I feel like you Could benefit more by layering the paint slowly, some areas tend to get gray because the layers got mixed to much. Overall I’m excited to see the end result!!! :)
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